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Metaphors
Age Group: Key Stage 2/3
Subject: English, Word level work
Topic: Descriptive writing
Provided by:
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Teaching Notes
Metaphors
Curriculum References
Key Stage 2/3 Strategy:  
Key Stage 2: Year 4.2. T10: Develop use of settings in own writing, making use of work on adjectives and figurative language.
Key Stage 3: Year 8. Wr8: Experiment with figurative language in conveying a sense of character and setting.
Activity Overview
This activity develops pupils' ability to distinguish between literal and figurative language, focusing on figurative techniques within descriptive language. It shows how such writing can help create a picture in the reader's 'mind's eye'. It may be used to reinforce NLS work on simile.
Resources
None needed for this activity.

Whole Class Activity Notes

Screen 1

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This screen sets out the objectives for the activity.


Screen 2

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This screen illustrates the difference between literal and figurative meaning. Ask pupils to use a dictionary to look up the highlighted words, or discuss with them the literal meaning of the highlighted words, with reference to the images displayed. Using the Literacy toolbar, open the Word Wallet and demonstrate the first sentence, dragging in 'buzzing' and discussing what this suggests about the class: 'Are they literally going 'bzzzzzzzz'?! Encourage pupils to complete the three remaining sentences.


Screen 3

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This screen explores two metaphors by relating the words used metaphorically to their literal or core meanings. The first one uses a Venn diagram to show that tourists and elephants can share a characteristic - as defined by 'herd'. The second one explores an extended meaning of the word 'foot' - the kind of thing that makes the English language so confusing for EAL learners. You may like to have your pupils find other ways of using 'herd' and 'foot' metaphorically. Also, you may like to explore the metaphorical potential in words like 'leaf', 'swallow' and 'fluid'.


Screen 4

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This screen develops the idea of metaphor and introduces the idea that metaphors 'borrow' ideas from the literal meaning of words. Explore other borrowed ideas that have arisen as a result of your work on the previous screen. The difference between metaphor and simile is also introduced here. Have your pupils rephrase the metaphors as similes.


Screen 5

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This screen contains a description of a cotton mill in the 19th century that is rich in figurative language. Read through the passage. You might like to ask pupils to close their eyes to help them picture the scene or use the Literacy toolbar's Read Text tool to support a group reading.


Screen 6

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This screen uses the text from Screen 5. Click on the highlighted sections to give pupils a sentence starter. You may want to model the first one yourself and then ask pupils to contribute to the others. Alternatively, you could use the Big Edit tool by highlighting the sentence starter and drafting and redrafting with the group until you have a comment on the figurative language with which you are happy. Then press 'Accept' to reinsert the text. Click the highlighted section again to hide it and move on to the next phrase.


Screen 7

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This screen contains a 3-in-a-row game. The cards on the board contain eight metaphors and eight similes. Divide the group into yellow and purple teams. Ask the team to take turns choosing a card on the board. They have to decide if it is a simile or metaphor. Click the card to reveal if they are correct. If they are, place a star in their colour on the card - the stars copy as they are dragged. If they are incorrect, click again to turn the card back over. The aim is to get three stars in a row.

Further Suggestions for Independent or Group Work
Provide the pupils with appropriate anthologies of poetry. Ask the pupils to select interesting similes and metaphors. They could then use ICT to produce a metaphor and simile wall display. Appropriate images from Clipart or the Internet could be added to the display.
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